What the Declaration of Independence states, is that when the time is right you break away, and you must state why you have done this. And when the time comes, and if government is in horrible conditions, it is your duty to fix the government. It also states and supports its reasons why America wanted to break away and what mistakes the British government had made. And most importantly, it declares that all men were born equally, and should be treated equally.
There are several horrible things that King James the 3 has done to America. Here are a couple:
For preventing us from trading with other parts of the world.
For charging taxes without America’s approval.
For sending us overseas and pretend that we are criminals.
He has refused to stick to his rules, and include American citizens.
He has not stuck to his rule that he would assist in America’s army.
And lastly the declaration states that America has attempted to tell the British that what they were doing was wrong. Only the British did not listen, so now they are writing the Declaration of Independence to put this form of government to an end.
There are several horrible things that King James the 3 has done to America. Here are a couple:
For preventing us from trading with other parts of the world.
For charging taxes without America’s approval.
For sending us overseas and pretend that we are criminals.
He has refused to stick to his rules, and include American citizens.
He has not stuck to his rule that he would assist in America’s army.
And lastly the declaration states that America has attempted to tell the British that what they were doing was wrong. Only the British did not listen, so now they are writing the Declaration of Independence to put this form of government to an end.
1 comments:
I really liked how you made it into modern English in a way that you can understand as well as others. The only problem is that the end part, a little bit of it is a left out. Other than that good job.
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